- The stakes need to be higher (and the conflicts need to reach that critical point).
- The action needs to be more well-rounded. It feels uneven.
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- The stakes need to be higher (and the conflicts need to reach that critical point).
- The action needs to be more well-rounded. It feels uneven.
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